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Monday, August 24, 2015

Recap: 2015 Pro Ultimate Team Logo Reviews

The series evaluating the team logos and nicknames of the professional Ultimate leagues is complete. A compilation of final grades for the 2015 AUDL teams are below.

Charlotte Express: A

Seattle Cascades: A

Atlanta Hustle: A-

Jacksonville Cannons: A-

Los Angeles Aviators: B+

Ottawa Outlaws: B+

Pittsburgh Thunderbirds: B+

Nashville NightWatch: B

San Diego Growlers: B

Raleigh Flyers: C


History: 2012 . 2013. 2014

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A big thanks to Eli Neugeboren for contributing to this series.

Friday, July 31, 2015

Review: Seattle Cascades (AUDL)

Part of the series critiquing professional ultimate team logos and nicknames.

Team: Seattle Cascades

Web: http://www.seattlecascades.com/ // twitter: @SeattleCascades

Representation: City // League: AUDL

Disc within logo?: Yes. // Ultimate element in team name?: No.

Background: The Cascades are a beautiful mountain range that extends from southern British Columbia through Washington and Oregon to Northern California. Since their first recorded exploration in the late 18th century by George Vancouver and his team, the Cascades have been filled with both history and folklore. Their logo reflects the strength, mystery, and vitality of the Cascades.[via]

Upon buying the Seattle AUDL franchise, the Titcomb Family (of Five Ultimate fame) retired the previous team name - Raptors.

First impression(s) from SLUDGE: Chewbacca, the legendary Wookiee, joined the Blue Man Group!  Hey, is that a hidden "5" on Casey's cheek?


Eli's Eval: This may be the single-best and most cohesively designed branding system of any professional ultimate team in either league. The wordmark is custom-designed lettering with a mountain range substituting for the letter A. The city name is san serif but blocky enough and italicized on the same angle as the team name. The points of the mountain range echo nicely with the extruded and pointy serifs on each of the letters that have them.

In addition to the wordmark there is a separate yeti icon that is delightfully monochrome in rich blues and blacks with bright yellow eyes and a highlight on the pug nose and one tiny sharp tooth that call attention to themselves and move the eye through the design. The official team discs have this icon printed playfully small on the plate which serves as a testament to the design, because it holds up at that size and also printed entirely across the chests of their light jerseys.

It works large. It works small. It works in color. And, I imagine it would work in black and white. It doesn't rely on any design gimmickry like gradients or heavy strokes. The wordmark can be separated into city or team name without losing any legibility or effectiveness, and they also work well together.

:Eli's Grades:
Grade: A
On Logo: A
On Typography: A

Review: Raleigh Flyers (AUDL)

Part of the series critiquing professional ultimate team logos and nicknames.

Team: Raleigh Flyers

Web: http://raleigh-flyers.com // twitter: @Raleigh_Flyers

Representation: City // League: AUDL

Disc within logo?: No. // Ultimate element in team name?: Yes.

Background:  Brewers was the first choice for team names, but was "denied" by the league.

North Carolina's license plate boasts "First in Flight" to commemorate the Wright brothers piloting the first powered airplane at the Outer Banks in December 1903. (OBX is 200+ miles away from Raleigh.) The original Flyers logo was a $99 online design contest winner:


First impression(s) from SLUDGE: Winged logo returns to the AUDL! The paper plane is goofy, yet playful. The logo design is very similar to this Wham-O (GASP!) Frisbee.


Eli's Eval: There is a lot going on in these designs, and although it is of a theme it does not create a cohesive branding platform. These designs suffer from an editing problem; someone needed to point to a few places and simplify. The split-color treatment that the city and team name have is dynamic but having both words use it gets way too busy, and adding a horizontal stroke of an accent blue only adds to the busy-ness and distracts from legibility, especially at the small size. It looks as though that horizontal is meant to be a contrail from the paper airplane that is flying out of the city name, but this is not the most effective execution.

The wordmark is on a slight angle and is also slightly italicized. This is then paired up with the wing shapes, which are beautifully executed but their symmetry is rendered moot because of those angles on the type. Perhaps the wings could be larger, perhaps the words could be on a flat baseline...I'm not sure what would be the best solution but I know I'm not looking at it.

There is an alternate logo that is a calligraphic R with the same arrow running through the crossbar and out of it. The R is very swashbuckler-y and the paper airplane is still somewhat awkward. Cutting a capital letter on its crossbar does not increase legibility.
Raleigh's many alternative logos throughout the 2015 season.
There is not really a separate logo here which causes turbulence. The typography has the paper airplane running through it and wings on the side, but if you look at these as separates they still don't really work all that well. This one has good technical execution but bad design choices and not enough editing to be cleared for takeoff.  The R-with-wings alt logo just still seems like two separate things slapped together. It's better than the big jumble but there's still no sophistication to it.

:Eli's Grades:
Grade: C
On Logo: C
On Typography: C

Thursday, July 30, 2015

Review: Charlotte Express (AUDL)

Part of the series critiquing professional ultimate team logos and nicknames.


Team: Charlotte Express

Web: http://charlotteexpress.com // twitter: @CLTExpress

Representation: City // League: AUDL

Disc within logo?: Yes. // Ultimate element in team name?: No.

Background: Charlotte chose the Express team name to recognize the city's history as a transportation hub. The Charlotte Express logo features an approaching locomotive with a crown incorporated into the design signifying Charlotte's royal connections as the Queen City. A stylized disc serves as the train's beacon, and the Express' blue colors are traditionally representative of Charlotte and the Carolinas. [via]

First impression(s) from SLUDGE: Cannot unsee the dress; not "The Dress," but a dress nonetheless.

Eli's Eval: So many good things going on with this at-track-tive design. There are multiple elements that all work together but also work individually or in different combinations. The train, the crown, the wordmarks, all of these can be taken individually or recombined for different situations. Everything feels like it was designed to go together, from the line weight to the way angles and curves are treated, to the balance of color from piece to piece.

The type is both sporty and somehow old-fashioned feeling, while still remaining contemporary. The crown above the city name is a nod to the city's nickname and not necessary but acts as a visual anchor and a little happy moment of pause in the middle of a busy design. All of the lines seem to point to it, but its own points shoot the eye right back out to the train and the type.

The type and train both feel very custom-made in a great way. They feel familiar and appropriate to the context of American sports but they also feel unique. The action lines on one side and smoke/clouds on the other are just one more example of where this designer could have been lazy but put in the extra effort to add more meaning and visual interest to this complete design. Same goes for the tracks at the bottom, underneath the type.

:Eli's Grades:
Grade: A
On Logo: A
On Typography: A

Review: Atlanta Hustle (AUDL)

Part of the series critiquing professional ultimate team logos and nicknames.
Team: Atlanta Hustle

Web: http://www.atlantahustle.com/ // twitter: @atlantahustle

Representation: City // League: AUDL

Disc within logo?: No. // Ultimate element in team name?: No.

Background: Hustle is a term for a disco dance, a scam, and a positive athletic attribute.  Grand Hustle Records - based in Atlanta, Georgia - is an independent record label that works with/has worked with artists like T.I., Meek Mills, and Iggy Azalea.

First impression(s) from SLUDGE: Totally looks an H...with an artistic element of the Han character. Has a linear similarity to the  musical notation meaning to raise a note's pitch by a half step - (♯) "sharp", which is different than a hashtag.

Eli's Eval: Hustle can be a generic word when associated with sports critiques, but the H that was designed for the Atlanta franchise is not generic at all. It is dynamic and well-executed design-wise and technically. Nothing is out of place and everything seems to serve a purpose. The raised and lowered posts seem to reference the cyclical nature of ultimate, and remind me of diagrammed plays, for some reason. There is a flow and balance to this that works really well. The only nit-picking I would do is to point out the clipped ends of the top and bottom-most extremity of the extruded posts could easily be extended to a point, rather than the default function of illustrator. Looks great up close and from far away. Very iconic and recognizable.


Team name is a giant slab san-serif, and the city name is a thinner san-serif, I'm hoping from the same family. Letter spacing on both words is very well executed: spaced out for the city name and in tight for the team name but neither one feels to open or too crowded.

:Eli's Grades:
Grade: A-
On Logo: A-
On Typography: A-

Friday, July 17, 2015

Review: Pittsburgh Thunderbirds (AUDL)

Part of the series critiquing professional ultimate team logos and nicknames.

Team: Pittsburgh Thunderbirds

Web: http://pghthunderbirds.com // twitter: @PGHThunderbirds

Representation: City // League: AUDL

Disc within logo?: No. // Ultimate element in team name?: No.

Background: A ballot of 18 potential team names were voted on by MARS Ultimate Tournament 2014 participants, and "Thunderbirds" was later announced as the winner. A thunderbird is an enormous bird with huge wingspans, and similar in appearance to a condor. Generally, the creature is regarded as a myth.

First impression(s) from SLUDGE: Besides borrowing elements from existing AUDL teams, the bird reminds me of the USPS icon.


Eli's Eval: The lightning bird logo does a nice job of hiding two elements in one. The easy way out would have been to make the eye a bolt but the designer incorporated it into the shape of the head while retaining the anatomy of the head and beak. I'm not sure what the dog-leg slash [indicated below in red dotted outline] in the gray shape is for, so that could go.
The light stroke around the outside of the gold shape seems too light and I think it would be better off without it. Even a slight white space/negative space between the two shapes would serve the same purpose more effectively. Backing up this theory is that the design looks much better in its embroidered form on the hats than it does on the discs or tees where it maintains its intentional structure.

The type is simple and bold and effective. The metal plate it is set on is a nice nod to the steel city and its rust belt history. The rivets are simple, the drop-shadow is not overdone, and the letter-spacing is consistently good. (Save between the B and I, and R and D.) The city name is clear at a small size and the designing type on a curve is never easy, so bonus points there.

The only other thing that I keep going back to is the rounded left edge of the eye: the rest of the design is pointy and sharp and angular and aggressive and this little teardrop on such an important part of the design just seems like a lost opportunity for consistency and stylistic reinforcement.

:Eli's Grades:
Grade: B+
On Logo: B+
On Typography: B+

Review: Ottawa Outlaws (AUDL)

Part of the series critiquing professional ultimate team logos and nicknames.

Team: Ottawa Outlaws

Web: http://ottawaoutlaws.com // twitter: @OutlawsAUDL

Representation: City // League: AUDL

Disc within logo?: No. // Ultimate element in team name?: No.

Background: Historically, the Bytown area (now known as Ottawa) was a logging town and a "rough neighborhood" filled with questionable characters with little regard for the law. Hence, the choice for the team's nickname.

When selecting a brand strategy the owners felt it important to design a logo that was modern and edgy and would look great on-line and on apparel. Also, they wanted to avoid a negative connotation that may associate us to crime, weapons, and fear.

We chose the horse as our symbol for a few reasons. There is the tie to the "Outlaw" way of life and the important bond that unifies the outlaw and his partner in crime. The horse played a significant role in the evolution and history of Canada, represented today through the Canadian Mounties. Most significantly, the horse symbolizes strength, power, and speed which are key attributes of Ultimate players. [via]

First impression(s) from SLUDGE: That classic, gruesome scene in The Godfather when the movie producer unpleasantly wakes up to a severed horse head aside him in bed. Also, the horse head image has commonalities with the chess piece of knight, which represents an armored cavalry.

Eli's Eval: Angry horse! Angry horse with a maple leaf tattoo! More serifs tweaked to have menacing pointy tips!

The type has a lot of effective things happening: contrasting scale for city and team name, contrasting colors (white/green-yellow), san serif vs serif, stroke vs drop-shadow. All of this variety comes together very well because the execution is spot-on. The designer was able to do all of these things and keep everything legible while creating a hierarchy of information through these elements rather than in spite of them. The ligature on the T's in Ottawa is nice and appropriate while the connection between the U and T feels unnecessary. The drop shadow enhances the design and gives it a bit of depth, while separating the two words.

The horse needs some love but is almost out of the barn. The stroke around the outside is too uniform and the rounded corners are at odds with the angular anger of the interior lines. The mouth, the inside of the ear, the shadow on the neck all have pointed angular edges, but the added stroke is soft. Consistency of line and mark will go a long way to unifying any design, and a lack of it can undermine otherwise strong work. The mouth of this horse suffers from the same lack of anatomically correct structure and looks more like a sneer than a growl. (Not that horses growl.)
Something strange is happening at the bottom of the mane where it goes behind the city name and I'm just not sure what I'm looking at: if this is more of the mane then it should be the same dark gray, if it is the horse's body then why is it so lumpy?

:Eli's Grades:
Grade: B+
On Logo: B-
On Typography: A-

Thursday, July 16, 2015

Review: San Diego Growlers (AUDL)

Part of the series critiquing professional ultimate team logos and nicknames.

Team: San Diego Growlers

Web: http://www.sdgrowlers.com // twitter: @SDGrowlers

Representation: City // League: AUDL

Disc within logo?: No. // Ultimate element in team name?: No.

Background: "The Growlers want to instill fear in their opponents, and a growling grey coyote (native to the region) represents this feeling perfectly. San Diego has also been called the craft beer capital of America, so the name is also a subtle nod to the nearly 100 breweries that exist currently." [via]

First impression(s) from SLUDGE: 1) Do coyotes growl? Listen. 2) The zig-zag lines on the coyote and in its mouth look like writing. See.

Eli's Eval: With the intentional double entendre with breweries, I think they left some great design opportunities on the table by going only with the coyote. The coyote itself is a very nice silhouette but the details seem to be missing a professional bite. The line quality, the anatomy of the mouth and the inconsistent shading and proportion all leave the impression that this is artwork leftover from Snoop Dogg's first album liner notes. (Just because that is an iconic album doesn't mean the artwork is top quality or should be emulated.)

The type is clean and clear and looks a lot like the Gatorade font. The good thing is it is familiar, it is legible, and the kerning is good. The extra pointy serif on the E in Growlers is a nice way of filling the gap that the L leaves and also giving more movement and action to the type. I do not like the odd highlight on the left of each letter. In design if you don't have a reason for including something you should leave it out, and there is no reason for this. No other aspect of the design has a highlight (save the top of the Coyote's forehead) and there is no other dimensionality to any of the type. It is so small as to be more of a distraction and since there is no larger dimensional context for it to fit into it is merely visually confusing.

:Eli's Grades:
Grade: B
On Logo: C
On Typography: B+

Review: Los Angeles Aviators (AUDL)

Part of the series critiquing professional ultimate team logos and nicknames.

Team: Los Angeles Aviators

Web: http://www.laaviators.com // twitter: @laaviators

Representation: City // League: AUDL

Disc within logo?: No. // Ultimate element in team name?: No.

Background: Los Angeles,California, has a historic and important role in aviation. In January of 1929, an aircraft established the longest time aloft at over 150 hours near Los Angeles. In May of 1955, the first transcontinental round trip on the same day departed from and returned to L.A. In 1977, the world's first successful human-powered aircraft was flown nearby in Pasadena. Also, in nearby Santa Monica, a Douglas Aircraft Company factory supplied the military aircrafts during World War II.

Of note, they were almost named The Los Angeles Republic.

First impression(s) from SLUDGE:  The Red Baron Pizza Guy. [h/t MisterGipson]


Eli's Eval: Angled type with pointy extrusions (serifs? spurs?)… we officially have a theme going! The font is reminiscent of the old Pan Am wordmark designed by Saul Bass, and I wish the logo was as well. The font is art deco-style, which is appropriate for LA's dominant form of architecture. The city name is title case, and the team name is all-caps, but using the same font, including the pointy serifs.

The logo of a vintage pilot is nicely drawn. (They also have an alternate female version for the Viva program, which is thoughtful, and nice that they didn't just make the scarf pink or something easy like that.) While the head(s) are nicely rendered with consistent line work, the three feathers coming out to the left need some help. They are neither feathers nor airplane wings nor a metal wing made of metal feathers. If there was only one it would read as a scarf, which would be fine and effective but with the two above it just gets confusing because they're trying to be too many things at the same time.

The other problem these "wings" create is that the logo is now directional, like the now classically awkward Patriots Elvis logo. That logo works well enough on the side of a helmet or even a shoulder, but on a logo tee anywhere else, really, it seems odd. I'm not saying these logos need to be perfectly symmetrical but a composition that is balanced based on central mass are generally better for sports teams.

:Eli's Grades:
Grade: B+
On Logo: B+
On Typography: B+

Wednesday, July 15, 2015

Review: Nashville NightWatch (AUDL)

Part of the series critiquing professional ultimate team logos and nicknames.

Team: Nashville NightWatch

Web: http://nashvillenightwatch.com/ // twitter: NSH_NightWatch

Representation: City // League: AUDL

Disc within logo?: No. // Ultimate element in team name?: No.

Background: The NightWatch name is meant to epitomize the team owners' "sense of responsibility and vigilance to both the Nashville community and the sport of ultimate as a whole." The design on the collar comes from the Tennessee state flag.

First impression(s) from SLUDGE: The grooming style is very Kenny Powers (Eastbound & Down) with an ensemble like that of Dread Pirate Roberts and Hamburglar. Also, the Nashville NightWatch-man and Gmail bandit might be cousins.



Eli's Eval: Overall this is a pretty good start but the design begins to break down under a little bit of scrutiny. The font seems like an odd choice – slightly chubby with some art deco elements like lowered cross bars, and an italic slant that may or may not be forced. The kerning is sloppy – giant gap between the N and A and again between the S and H, and again and again after that. Both city and team name are all-caps, so the only thing differentiating them is color and the hairline dropshadow on the team name. The city name is slightly smaller than team name but this needs more contrast of scale to really separate the two.

The logo is also nice enough, but needs help to feel finished. There are things like the black strokes at either end of the hat band and the rounded bump on the back of the bandana/mask that feel rushed or totally unnecessary. The pointy ends of the long hair don’t really point in any direction, and the white stroke around them reinforces the haphazard feel. Perhaps they should all three point straight out? I like the inclusion of the state flag's three-stars in a circle on the collar, but the combination of a gray (why not white?) and small scale make it nearly disappear. You could get rid of the red piping on the collar of our hero and have more room for this element. The curve of the brim of the hat seems to be a bit too high, which raises the top of the hat itself to an uncomfortable height. This just needs a bit more time in under the watch of a pro and it could be great.

:Eli's Grades:
Grade: B
On Logo: B+
On Typography: B- (not terrible, but not imaginative)

Review: Jacksonville Cannons (AUDL)

Part of the series critiquing professional ultimate team logos and nicknames.

Team: Jacksonville Cannons

Web: http://jaxcannons.com // twitter: @JaxCannons

Representation: City // League: AUDL

Disc within logo?: No. // Ultimate element in team name?: No.

Background: Jacksonville, Florida, has a rich military history plus is home to the Naval Air Station Jacksonville and Naval Station Mayport. Cannons - first used in battle in August 1346 - are standard artillery in naval warfare.

Jacksonville almost shot themselves in the foot by paying $175 for this logo:
Jax did not end up going with this logo; and, we're all better for it.

First impression(s) from SLUDGE:  (DISCLAIMER: I'm no cannon expert.) The cannon looks like a tank. (DISCLAIMER:I'm not a tank expert.)  Anyway, "gun turret" is probably a more proper term of the twin caliber weaponry depicted as a cannon.

Eli's Eval: Solid design, great technical execution on the cannons. The perspective on the cannon twin guns is spot-on, as is the perspective on the base. I wish the type was angled to be on the same plane as the front plate of the cannon. One line or one circle off even a little bit could make the whole design fall apart. The black, white, and gray do enough to give the impression of metal without having to resort to bad gradients or filters. (Thank goodness for restraint!) The type is simple but effective. Two fonts, one with the ubiquitous serif spurs, and one that is more clean-feeling. The contrasting scale of the words gives us all the separation we need, and the kerning is really well done so that each letter fits the next like a puzzle. The accent color, yellow, is used only to add a stroke to the entire outside of the design and this is another case of restraint leading to stronger design.

:Eli's Grades:
Grade: A-
On Logo: A-
On Typography: A-

Tuesday, July 14, 2015

Review of Pro Ultimate Team Logos (2015)

Now in its fourth year, our motivation for critiquing the logos and nicknames of pro ultimate teams remains the same: if the professional leagues want to be taken seriously as "professional," then they should present themselves "professionally."

A logo is a team's public image utilized on websites, social media, advertising, merchandise and uniforms, so their logo should not be ugly and it should not be poorly designed. The sport will someday be respected on its athletic merits, but until then, pro ultimate will be judged on its outward appearance. Having a presentable team logo is an excellent starting point.


Eli Neugeboren [@enoogs . http://enoogs.tumblr.com/] returns to evaluate and grade the logos for ten professional ultimate teams.


Catch up on past evaluations:
AUDL logos in 2012

AUDL & MLU logos in 2013

AUDL logos in 2014

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